Hi teresa..you are right..it definitely needs more editing..but i didn't want to get stuck in editing this to perfection..i never thought this would reach so many people..I just wanted to put this out coz it was nagging me..and in response to your other comment i was not at all complaining about me getting less views..i can suck it up if my writing is bad and therefore my views are low..but what i demanded was medium give equal distribution chance to all your articles regardless of your topic..it certainly favours certain topics and titles and people are taking advantage of it to write articles that is " designed for curation" filled with high level fluff..
i am not alone in thinking this as you can see many others feel the same way too..another main issue was even your best performing articles stop performing articles stop getting views after a point..this is not how an unbiased algorithm is supposed to work...anyway, if in case you come across any of my articles in the future I hope I don't disappoint you as much as this one..cheers.